Mighty Red Pen

January 8, 2008

Needs !! proofreading

Filed under: Overseen,Perilous punctuation — mighty red pen @ 7:57 pm
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Thanks to David for a submission with unusual, well, everything:

needs-attention.jpg

Where to begin? There’s the extraneous capitalization of restroom and any employee, for one thing, but my fave is what appears to be a bizarro pair of exclamation points or lowercase l’s right in the middle of the sentence.

2 Comments »

  1. I’m feeling rather sorry for the poor sap who sits closest to the bathroom. I bet he’s the one who gets the card most often and, I suspect, has to give the needed attention (whatever that means) to the Restroom. I’d ask for a cube re-assignment!

    Comment by Margarita — January 8, 2008 @ 9:11 pm | Reply

  2. It’s actually from a restaurant — so the danger probably gets spread among the wait staff.

    The blurry shapes are, indeed, MRP’s favorite punctuation marks!! If you are just so excited about the state of the Restroom!! you should draw attention to that fact!!

    Very odd.

    Comment by David — January 9, 2008 @ 3:01 pm | Reply


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